My Dream Poem by Hunter Dasten
My Dream
The burden of reality, and conscious procedures
prevent me from fully recalling just how vivid your presence was
though, I can venture with enough forethought, to express it:
Your hair seemed to float in a dance of jubilation through the air,
as if animated by the most crystalline ocean of a world yet conceived.
And what myths my mind invents of your phosphorescent smile!
Together we laughed with such enthusiasm it rivaled youthful innocence
I would vanquish all ambition, all human longing still
to have never left that dream, your presence.
Such attachment, I have never felt and may such a dream never come again!
May nightmares populate my evening, and terror grip each awakening.
I am not strong enough, to wake up with your face in my minds eye.
I am not strong enough, to handle that, when you're nowhere in sight.
Again - simply brilliant. You have such a beautiful way with words.
I am not strong enough, to wake up with your face in my minds eye. I am not strong enough, to handle that, when you're nowhere in sight. I love these lines..Simply beautiful
i think this is a great poem straight from the heart i love it great job! ! !
Amazing! This deep and heart touching write clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World. This thought provoking write is well penned and poignant! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
Dreams - of Love and God, synonymous. Poetry, a phantasmal journey from within skies of depth and spiritual oceans of sky Chart your course and visit there forever ...louie
I've read many poems about dreams-just finished reading for the 2nd time 'The Alchemist' your poem of 'My dream' is delightful. the burden of reality can prevent one from savoring dreams as they're being pursued. I enjoyed the style and its flow. I'm giving it a 10-however when I vote it does not register. Keep writing and thanks for inviting me to your poems and welcome to poem hunter!
I hate to say it, but you are a better poet than me... I was just kidding I would say that you are better than me any day... Nice job. Keep up the good writing
Awe.mazing :) Whoever this one is who inspires your poems, she must be a great deal of worth with what such kind words your provide for her.
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I would like to translate this poem
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Marvelous, superb, fantastic. the beauty, sensitivity, purity...all touch, no this poem shakes you up. Chhavi Anupam