My Dad Poem by amrita navneet

My Dad

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You gave me happiness
a way to live.......
you gave me a new start
do-not leave me alone

you did hold my hand
while searching a path.........
you lighted a candle
when it was dark.........

you are the river for me
which flows and do not stop
I'm incomplete without
you and mom

you are just as the cloud
who rains for every one
no mater how one gets wet
but its true you remove the sweat....

Dad I love you
I know so do you to me
you mom and me
together forms we

we together
forms our family and
dad i love you the most
just as you like butter and toast

I as a daughter
need your blessing
wish me good luck
when I do not be with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahatisham Alam 23 July 2008

AMRITA this one is ' A PERFECT TRIBUTE TO THE PARENTS ' duniya me wo log bahut achchhe hote hain jo apne mummy papa se itna pyar karte hain.

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Blue Eyes 19 July 2008

all people feel the same about their parents but u expressed ur feelings better than most poeple do

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C. P. Sharma 13 June 2008

Awesome poetry even at this age. You have a great poetic talent. God bless you. The following lines are superb: you are the river for me which flows and (doesn't) stop I'm incomplete without you and mom you are just as the cloud (that) rains for every one no mater how one gets wet but its true you remove the sweat.... Keep it up.

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Rani Turton 13 June 2008

Sentiments that are very well-expressed. Keep writng, Amrita.

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