* Moon & Star Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Fine images here in this fantastic short poem! 10+

moon and stars are necklaces beyond the control of the creator...this is compared to downearth as ocean act as predator..this poem of yours is nice..

Moon and star, are closer, Is ocean, Turbulent, Is moon pulling sea waves, A natural eco cycle that controls the world to run smooth..a beautiful metaphor for life's changing events in the circle of life.

I hope so, Weathers are predator, Breaking the silence, Waves are pouring, Gems and stones, Out of sea, Wait for morning, And singing breeze wow great task and I really agree with rehana.. but if try to perceive the idea, I am sure we may find all the same echo circle you expressed in the poem..really well done, romantic, sweet, and meaningful... liked it...well done friend and thansk for your sweet words for me too...

there are seeds of greatness in your work. work to get the gems and diamonds out in order. tq

I luv the moon so i enjoyd the way u portrayed the imagery. Written in a nature's charming style. So nice to read u again sir.

Great use of language once again, well done

A beautiful expression of unity and Oneness in nature. A gem of the poem, thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

a lovely poem with beautiful images..i enjoyed it

from moon and stars to waves and to the gems they pour on...a lot is there to understand when you say wait in the breeze...good work...creative...10