Moods: Aquatic Undulations Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Moods: Aquatic Undulations

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No artificially induced sedation,
No inhibitor of spiritual luminosity
Can ever eclipse the diamond of your soul!
For it shall forever brightly sparkle.
Your liquid being, shaping in its multi-facets,
Reflecting the human being's mystery:
Genius in its authenticity—cord to Infinity;
Egoless, in its own bland simplicity:
The marvel of a pure human being
In its completeness—true to itself: fragile,
Innocent, warm, and emotionally
Fluctuating upon the wavy waters of life:
Unpredictable, ephemeral—the divine messenger
Of the Otherworld oscillating at the threshold
Between the two, with the mystery of your
Transcendent eyes, at the border of our limitation:
The Seer perceives the mysteries
Obscured to the rest of us: —you ‘See'!
They try to embody you, those entities of light,
Those Angels of the Heaven of divine appearance,
Tuning into your frequency, disrupting your being.
The Shamans can ‘See, ' and feel their vibrations too,
Surrounding your aura, eager to communicate:
You are not alone! —take us to that portal
Into the Otherworld—we feel it is there,
We feel its presence when we are most alone,
Detached from the earthly matters:
When we are freely floating
Through the constellations of our own minds...

Friday, October 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: psychology,spirituality,mood,perception
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 13 November 2016

Mihaela, try to be simple, more specific, less abstract and avoid using pompous expressions. _____________________ A poem by Emily Dickinson (1830–86) : At half-past three a single bird Unto a silent sky Propounded but a single term Of cautious melody. At half-past four, experiment 5 Had subjugated test, And lo! her silver principle Supplanted all the rest. At half-past seven, element Nor implement was seen, 10 And place was where the presence was, Circumference between.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 15 November 2016

You have a lot of potential to expand. Take advantage of it.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 November 2016

'' I can't change overnight into a serious literary author. You can't compare apples to oranges. William Faulkner was a great literary genius. I am not. '' - John Grisham

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Hazel Durham 28 October 2016

Brilliant write with superb choice of words that are captivating and mesmerizing, as you bring the reader on a enchanting spiritual journey of serenity of the presence of God and that Otherworld! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2016

Detached. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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