Monoku # 01 Poem by BRITTE NINAD

Monoku # 01

Rating: 4.2


Death is
satisfaction; silence of
immortal soul


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Death is
expiration of earthly body;
ecstasy of soul


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I don't want to die;
carry re-death of death
to be immortal


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I kill
my earthly rule of body
to get godly soul


- May 05,2018

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,immortality,mystical
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
By the word of dying and killing I refer to the controlling my greedy mind.

In this world if I learn to rule over me then I will discover my kingdom of knowledge and I will dominate and administrate strongly over myself.
And if defeated by earthly body this mortal being will make me also mortal, then I will fail to discover the mystery of the creation of GOD.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2018

The heavenly soul, the earthly body if walk side by side in a moderate way, it's a very good life. I think there is no need of killing our instincts, just respond to the call of instincts within the centuries old established customs and taboos. It's a thoughtful poem.

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Britte Ninad 19 May 2018

Dear POET AKHTAR greatly thanks for your scrutinizing superbly

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2018

Birth! ! Life and death! Facing Natural Laws. Thanks for sharing.

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Adeeb Alfateh 11 June 2019

great poem; great 10++++++++++++++

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Riza Braholli 02 July 2018

the death and unmortal soul... very nice... congrats. riza

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Britte Ninad 11 June 2019

Thank you dear poet Riza Braholli

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 23 June 2018

Thanks for sharing this phylosophical poem...

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The Crow 15 June 2018

fo rTat maggot! - - - - -

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 June 2018

you have the sharpness of the human mind not many can boast of why stop read my poems moms smiles and mothers day today be carried away into the realms of time one day some day you will remeber poets of my kind who lead you the line of immortality as far as it concerns poetry read more than many views will germinate and then from your within genes will emanate and take the worlds progeny ahead there is no road end yet

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Britte Ninad 11 June 2019

Thanks a lot Dear Poet The Poet Poet for your reading and valuable comment

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