~ Mon Escorte ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Mon Escorte ~

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~ Mon Escorte ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
01 April,2010

When
I was in slumber
Was called upon
Afore timely nothing for.

Entire universe was
Still speechless
In the beams of stars
Dense darkness
Earth was shrouded with.

Family lamented
How in dark
Will recognize the path?

I voiced: Will walk with own light
Look the candle is here in my hand.

More the candle emitting
Light in full glow
Equally more and more
Obstacles fuddled.

The blended umbra
Spreads chiaroscuro
Partial vision blurs me.

Quicker I walk fearlessly
By the cloud dust
More and more
The sky gets embraced.

The flame quivers
By fidget wind
My gaits get confounded
In every step.

Suddenly
The head collided
With the mesh of woods
Candle went off suddenly
Have lost the path already
I discover.

In front
Dense darkness
Yell with stooped head
I’ve lost all powers.

In the very moment
Suddenly find
Pal of my entire life
Mon Escorte
Behind already!


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[Adapted from R.N.Tagore [full info refer Bliss 5th Poem –niv]

Glossary: Mon Escorte ~ My Escort

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Braja K Sarkar 09 April 2010

Nice poem...I enjoyed it..

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Noel Horlanda 10 April 2010

Brightness brings you to good ideas, good fortune and guide you in every way, to choose anything you want, wherever you go you'll not get lost. Light brightens your heart and mind, it could cope understanding and more knowledge, enhance wisdom and social dealings with others.And if you lost the light, you'll end up blind to the world. Very good craft I would say.

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Rinki Nandy 12 April 2010

reading this was like dreaming in a dreamland, , , b'ful words froma b'ful mind.

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Photode Photode 14 April 2010

Narrative poem but finish is splendid splendiferous Finish is solacing rewarding reverencing Very well adapted from RNT and Caption ‘Mon Escorte’ unparallel…thanks Poet 10++

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nature 360 15 April 2010

I feel the vibes of birth as we are lead into what we are today. And still need someone to escort us; God?

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Julius Lenjatin 06 July 2013

Nice poem, keep up the good work, i will definitely borrow a leave from your poems

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

So good to have an escort someone you can always turn to when you're among the shades and hues. I like shades and hues as well (lost painters soul lol at myself) embrace them before casting them.

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Lynn Glover 05 August 2010

Niv: I read and enjoyed this poem immensely and really liked the line more and more the sky gets embraced, beautiful. Thanks for the invite. Lynn

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David Beckham 05 August 2010

Entire universe was Still speechless In the beams of stars Dense darkness Earth was shrouded with ==== Great metaphor here. We all have a guiding angel that walks with us they keep us out of harms way. In another way they provide light where there is dark....if the whole poetic world was dark, your poems help bring light to an already dead end. Lol

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 July 2010

Once a boy visited his grandmother and had to return to his mother's house late before nightfall through a dense jungle. Her grandmother told, 'Don't worry, Lord Krishna will accompany you, but you should not look back.' He was hearing the sound of anklets behind and was going ahead without any fear. At the end of the forest, out of curiosity, when he looked back, none was there and the jingling sound of the anklet had also stopped. This poem reminds of this story I have heard. A nice presentation of Mon Escorte.

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