Misfit Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Misfit

Rating: 5.0


My hair's too long
My skirt's too short
My thoughts are wrong
My rights aren't fought

My days are dark
I'm in a daze
A bruised birthmark
From yesterdays

Gun to my head
Heavy and hard
"Just drive, " he said
"I'll pay by card"

Their hate so ful
It's spilling over
Bright minds cause all
Melanoma

Tuesday, November 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: abused,bullying,misanthropy,prejudice,sad,victim
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My tags always make my poems sound way more serious than they actually are.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 December 2019

Woah hard hitting strong words poem and I like the vivid imagism of phrasing you express and depict with. Kudos. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too, titled, 'bullfighters: the bull bullies'

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Shaun Cronick 26 November 2019

Nicely done, well written with a great rhythm, flow and beat to it. And one to make any reader think about it's haunting message. Thank you Bryony for writing and sharing this.10++ and added to my favourites. Thanks again and take care.

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