Migration - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Migration - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Huge flocks of wild geese
Winged across the cloudless sky
Formed a V- shaped flight
Gathered their strength together
Defying the wild, wild wind.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2021

A fabulous tanka... appreciated. Top score

0 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 05 August 2021

Long flights together in V shape amazes me everytime I see them during the winter season, yes they are great flyers. Very crafty tanka with great imageries.5****

0 0 Reply
Quaid-Uz- Zaman 05 August 2021

A nice poem with beautiful imagery.

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

Yes, I have seen them too, flying in great flocks to the warm south. So precisely forming a V-form. A fascinating poem fervently told but calmly rendered. A very beautiful Tanka.5 Stars fullest on Top!

0 0 Reply
Anjandev Roy 10 August 2021

This is simply amazing

0 0 Reply
Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Togetherness gives strength is rightly said in these beautiful line.

0 0 Reply
Nabakishore Dash 15 June 2023

Brilliant tanka.does the v shape stand for victory?

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2021

A very enjoyable read. This V shaped flight, I ever read in your poemsite. It is like rereading that once so beautiful poem, brilliant Tanka presented. Thank you for sharing this gem. To My Favourites

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2021

I just awoke and discovered a most freshening and uplifting poem in Migration. Flight of wild geese to warmer places

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2021

What a Loveliest Tanka! So thoughtfully created and most beautifully presented in full brilliance and 5 Stars fullest on Top, dear beautiful great Poetess!

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
Close
Error Success