Huge flocks of wild geese
Winged across the cloudless sky
Formed a V- shaped flight
Gathered their strength together
Defying the wild, wild wind.
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Long flights together in V shape amazes me everytime I see them during the winter season, yes they are great flyers. Very crafty tanka with great imageries.5****
Yes, I have seen them too, flying in great flocks to the warm south. So precisely forming a V-form. A fascinating poem fervently told but calmly rendered. A very beautiful Tanka.5 Stars fullest on Top!
Togetherness gives strength is rightly said in these beautiful line.
A very enjoyable read. This V shaped flight, I ever read in your poemsite. It is like rereading that once so beautiful poem, brilliant Tanka presented. Thank you for sharing this gem. To My Favourites
I just awoke and discovered a most freshening and uplifting poem in Migration. Flight of wild geese to warmer places
What a Loveliest Tanka! So thoughtfully created and most beautifully presented in full brilliance and 5 Stars fullest on Top, dear beautiful great Poetess!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fabulous tanka... appreciated. Top score