Memories Poem by Payal Priya

Memories

Rating: 5.0


Rain is over
The roads;
Caked with mud,
Etched with footprints,
Some clear, some fading,
Like memories.





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Thursday, March 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 28 March 2017

Simple and wonderful. So precisely gave the impression of Memories as in Nature's Print! Thanks for sharing! ! 10+

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Dr. Yahya 27 March 2017

A fine simile of cake of mud. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2017

'Caked with mud'! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Payal Priya 23 March 2017

Thank you Rajnish for the lovely comment☺

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Rajnish Manga 23 March 2017

Lovely. A small observation props up a philosophy of life. Thanks.

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