Lovesong Poem by Practicing Poetess

Lovesong

Rating: 4.8


It's been so long now,
Thought that I'd learned to live without it.
But feelings grow strong now
So strong, that it can't be doubted.

Knowing you
Is helping me to
Believe again
I want to live, not just exist
Now I have hope within

I want to be your woman
Not just someday, but starting right now
We could be such a winning team
I know that you would show me how

If you could want me
I'd be right here for you, to stay
We'd work together
Never forgetting time to play

We'd talk about everything
We'd share a common vision
Our hearts a joyful song would sing
Now I feel I'm on a mission

I want to be your woman
Not just someday, but starting right here
If this sounds good to you, reach out - -
You know I'm very near.

Thursday, May 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,love,together
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on March 17,1997 (an older poem)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonathan Maldonado 27 August 2017

I really like this makes me wonder who inspired the hope in these lines, reminds me we all have a special person(s) that at varying moments bring us up from our lows just when we thought it could never be. +10

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Practicing Poetess 28 August 2017

Thank you, Jonathan, for reading & rating! This particular poem is an oldie mouldy goldie of mine (had to unearth it from the archives!) But your feedback makes it feel fresh & new!

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Barry Middleton 11 May 2017

A very direct approach. Very well written.

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Many thanks, Barry! You surprise me, commenting so late- - You impressed me as an early bird!

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