Lost My Mind.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Lost My Mind....

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Today my mind is closed, you know?
I lost the key to open it
that's not really a bulsh*t
I won't ever place a post-it
then that will indeed truly a bulshit!

Please, forgive this hit of mine
yours, his, hers or thine
I don't mind

but first I wanna tell ye
I feel so lost
lost in a mess of one word
that is not straightly absurd

the word won't defy
please specify
I am lost since my loved one
isn't whatsapping me anymore
you don't know the reason
perhaps it is treason
treason for what? !
because of utmost love?

I dare to bet
he is still sleeping abed
no saldo, no wifi so no whatsappin' nor
emailin' too
I am disillusioned, today I have from head to toe
my greatest woe
lost in a mess of one word
must one have for emailin'
of course, Saldo
absurd!
Because of only that one word? !
Saldo....
not because of that one word
because I do not possess that
Saldo
not that word
but because of
that Saldo
the amount....
halloo!



© Sylvia Frances Chan
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AD.Saturday the 27th January 2018
@18.45 Hrs. P.M. West-European Time

Saturday, January 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What if your loved one has no Saldo and so he cannot whatsapp his beloved one en sadly lay abed, but from the other side, his loved one thought that he just won't call nor whatsapp her. Was this true love?
! Just read the poem, perhaps a saddest poem or one with a hilarious content. Thank you for the attention done to understand this seemingly easy poem. But....how deep or great is Easiness? Thank you so much
that you dropped in at my poem side, God's Blessings, sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch poetess. Saturday the 27th January 2018 @18.45 hrs P.M. West-European Time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 March 2019

Reading this again, I got a greatest laughter, Robert. IF you are near, you can hear that. Thank you so much for your kindest comment. Indeed a modern poem on love.

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Luo Zhihai 28 September 2018

Love is an eternal theme. A very good poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 September 2018

Thank you so much for your kindest comment and compliment, sincerely Sylvia FC

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