Lost Love Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Lost Love

Rating: 4.9


By one step two steps
I walk thousands of miles
Now on to another millennium

Withered petals, fallen leaves
Washed away footprints and hand writings
Now on gathered in dusty envelop

Feathers of peacock, colorful bangles
Anklet ring and black orchid perfume
Now on stored in the tattered bag

Past has gone away far behind
Poetic presence is the beautiful companion
For the future don't want lost the mirror

Lost love I won't draw on the sky canvas
Lost love I won't incarnate in the temple
Lost love won't write in the poetic note

Wound birth won't find out the lost love
Wound birth won't wait for the lost love
Wound birth won't believe more …..


©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
26/12/2022

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BRITTE NINAD 26 December 2022

nothing is stoppable; all is well and all in well; the well is lost of behind something! - is it?

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Mac Che 26 December 2022

lost love is lost in your way; don't cry for the lost something; be brave heart

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Mac Che 26 December 2022

come, fill up the empty canvas of poetic sky, write on the poetic field, collect all loving poetic crops

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David Wood 26 December 2022

Don't rush love or it won't happen, and time is a good, and probably the only, healer.

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M. Asim Nehal 26 December 2022

Very true. They are indifferent souls on earth.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

Lost love is tragic and so very painful. Yet, if we can learn the lessons from that pain, our lives will be enriched. Sorry for missing you receiving POD. A Very Hearty Belated Congrats, Mahtab!

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Sandra Feldman 22 January 2023

The hurt comes thru, very poetically too! A memorable poem of hurt and true love.

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 January 2023

Love gives or takes maintaining no proportionality.. well done....Congrats!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 21 January 2023

Thanks to everyone those who read me, gave time and did comment; and wecome every reader to this world class literary site and come to enjoy here the poetic unique gist where I never lose the love.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 January 2023

A beautiful and vivid depiction of lost love. Wonderful poetic expressions and great imagery.

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