Living The Life! Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage
Living The Life!
Go! And get it, its looking nice
Devour it at once, tasty, it should be
Munch and swallow. Enjoying.......aren't you?
Now, ........ Feel consequences and
Suffer the pain, of the hook, underneath.
Wonderful poem, Jayatissa. One should never commit without first examining.
Yes Kelly, that's one thing. Other thing is, underneath every pleasure, always there is a hidden pain in life. Thank you for encouraging us.
This is great! I feel the extended metaphor....the biting and swallowing, the being hooked, and finally finding myself reeled in. You've written about a great life lesson. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/15/2024 12:43:40 PM # 1.0.0.1119
We do not know where danger lurks. Behind something that may look very attractive outwardly there can be a trap! So we have to proceed in life with real caution! Great lesson!
Thank you Valsa for your comment.