Those of you who are sixty plus;
May find it difficult to board a bus;
Take from bank a personal loan,
Purchase with it a sturdy drone,
So as to commute without a fuss.
Growing up along the paths of life! ! Growing old. Dedicated to 60 Plus! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I'm grateful to you for your kind words of appreciation, Dear Friend.
haha so much more is difficult after sixty. Its battle of will. What to pick and what to leave.Great limerick.
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Take from bank a personal loan, Purchase with it a sturdy drone, laughing point of view, thanks for sharing
It's always a pleasure to read your comments. Thanks, Dear Friend, for a positive feedback.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When you are sixty and above, you enter into phase of freedom or as Shakespeare says into second childhood It is a good time, when you begin to enjoy life with ease and lesser responsibilities. Right Rajnish ji, there is nothing to fuss about.
Thanks a lot, Geeta ji. I'm extremely pleased to have this humble poem reviewed by you so thoughtfully. Shakespeare and you both are right when dwelling on old age. Incidentally, long back, my father fell on the road while de-boarding a bus and got serious injuries. He could not recover from the impact. Today, we observe his 27th death anniversary.