Let The Rain Shine Poem by G. Akanji Olaniyi

Let The Rain Shine

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Let the rain shine
No, not fall
When it shines
Its sparkles will brighten our hearts
Let the sun fall
No not shine
Its torrents will cool our hearts
It baffles me
The deeming moonlight in your eyes
I knew it to be glowing bright
Is the dream dying?
Even if the spirit is low
Agreed
The hope is surely alive
You make the journey seen a million mile
Let’s keep the hope alive

OLANIYI G. AKANJI
© 2014

Wednesday, May 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 January 2017

While rain drops come across light they shine at the rate. Deeming moonlight does favour mind. Nice imagery is drawn in this poem and life blooms with memory. Sun falls with shine. Dream comes in reality. Million mile's journey is witnessed. Hopes are alive reading this. An interesting poem....10

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