Left Without Leaving. Poem by Perfection Is Flawed

Left Without Leaving.

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Left
without leaving

Died
without dying

Lived
without living.

*

mask shattered
strings snapped

Hollow eyes don't see themselves in the mirror

Empty souls have no reflection.

*

whoam i? whoam i?

[[wherehaveyougonelittleone?
lostamidstthepuddlesanddaisies.]]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
merc gabriell 15 March 2006

i admire the phrasing of the words. i can feel the internal loss and the imploding pain, the feeling of being caved in (wherehaveyougonelittleone? /lostamidstthepuddlesanddaisies) . then the question 'whoam i? ' a tug-of-war with one's self. dramatic, indeed. good work, rainy days. hope everything is sunny with you. sincerely, merc

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