Last Night Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Very sad, lack of understanding and restricted communication is the source of such things, though whims are whims..Nice poem 10 Stars

Often things go misunderstood without communication in a relationship. Both suffering but no one understanding. And the scars on my body Mirrors the entire story.... A story is best understood when author expressed rest all are speculations all present.

last night gave birth the venomous teeth to bite the rising dawn! ! ! !

Even if the body bears the brutality, flowers of poetry keep blooming in mind- what a beauty! Full marks,5/5!

A very delicate and sensitive write! Highly expressive...Top score!

The entire poem expresses brutality of men upon women mainly due to sheer lack of mutual understanding.Really a shocking event.superb

Very poignant issue of domestic violence and male chauvinism, discussion of which is taboo in our culture, is depicted with profound sincerity and touching openness in the poem. Something only Aarzoo can do. Great poem.

The brutality is vividly pictured. Deserves top marks

Your poem brings the reader face to face with a situation that undermines the status of women in the society, erodes traditional familial values and promotes or legitimizes domestic violence and cruelty against women. A small poem that spurs in-depth interpretation. Thanks.

Good poem. " Pleasure pain darkness light"