Just Beyond The Sunset Revisited Poem by David Harris

Just Beyond The Sunset Revisited

Rating: 4.8


Time flies by so quickly
almost in a blink of an eye
and years vanish almost completely.
It does not seem forty-three years ago
I put pen to paper and wrote
what has turned out to be my best poem ever.
The one that has attracted more attention
than any other I have written.
Its accolades still confound me
as I am in wonder of them all.
Especially as it was never written
as a poem at all, but a lyric for a song.
As a lyric, it was turned down
as being rather immature,
but as a poem, it is loved by everyone.
I find it hard to believe that forty-four people
have added it to their favourites list.
I am still rather in awe of its reception.
I am still trying to comprehend
that any one of my works would be so highly prized.
Every time I read it, I try to find
the essence everyone else sees.
The beauty within it that captures their imagination.
One day someone might explain to me
the beauty I actually captured,
at least I hope they will,
as I’d dearly love to know.

16 November 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 10 August 2015

Excellent. Beautiful imagery with intelligent metaphor. Really sunny days become polluted with uncertainty and inhumanity. Sunset and beyond the right place to escape. Thanks for sharing.

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Carol Gall 16 November 2009

i remember david your poem touched everyone just be happy 10

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Patti Masterman 16 November 2009

Well, it seems I need to go hunt that poem! Thanks for the clue! (just love a good treasure hunt) . smiles, Patti

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