Just A Cybernetic Message.......... Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Just A Cybernetic Message..........

Rating: 5.0


You being a chick in our nest
when took to your tenderly wings,
on test, for the first time
Something, I remember, truly bothered me
and I did scribbled it down
experiencing solace in mind, then

Being a grown up self reliant cockerel
you flew away, once again
Scanning Scandinavian blues, this time
still, making my inner soul feel it

But, to write about it, this time too?
Never mind....
I'll remain quite, chewing the cud,
Cos' She is there now, and let her do it.

Nonetheless, just know my little son
all the lamps lit in full, will fail
to brighten up our little nest, like earlier,
when we've to remember, once more
Mother hen's birthday, tomorrow

Just A Cybernetic Message..........
Saturday, October 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,birthday greetings
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 December 2016

Lovely poem marked with that special feeling a father has for his child.... Also a reminder in his hectic life not to forget an important day of sweet wishes which his mother rightly deserves!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2016

Solace in mind! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Elena Sandu 09 November 2016

Beautiful poem, it captures the reader's wonders, as a parent I can find many things to read between the lines.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 14 November 2016

Thank you Elena for your observations and comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2016

Beautiful and powerful poem this is really. Very nicely birthday wish is conveyed. This gives inner soul a nice feeling. Brightening up the little nest is interesting really.10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 November 2016

Thank you Kumar for the comment

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Christopher Tye 07 November 2016

Really beautiful poem, a very special treat for someone.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 November 2016

Thank you Chris for your generous comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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