It Tears My Wings To Shreds Poem by Luz Hanaii

It Tears My Wings To Shreds

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To say that we should go our separate ways
is not at all in tune with me.
Perhaps I need to tune my heart
my mind
and all that makes me
ME!

Your are my love
my friend
protector
confidant.

To think that you may leave some day
It tears my wings to shreds!

Wednesday, February 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 16 August 2018

Perhaps I need to tune my heart my mind and all that makes me ME! .the thought that you may leave m e......... imagining things and killing you joy of life......... take life as it is..... live in this present moment............. and be happy. you have presented a fine poem.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 30 April 2018

To think that you may leave some day It tears my wings to shreds! Touching lines of a lovely poem.

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Connie Yost 08 March 2017

Without our wings we cannot fly. This is a very touching poem.

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