It's Raining Poem by Heather Burns
It's Raining
It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart
washing away dreams of
yesterday
puddles forming filling
the meadows
where once we strolled
hand in hand across
fields of flowers
picking daisies counting
petals
slipping a blossom in my
hair
soft winds continue
whispering your name
sweet breezes tantalize
my mind
filling it with thoughts
of you.
Good poem! I too wrote one about rain on a different vein. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline
Pure romance in these words. Love the title washing away dreams of yesterday. Thank you
Tear-drops raining on heart's sidewalks. Beautiful metaphor. Thank you.
Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10
'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!
love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)
Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Romantic and delicate memories of a past a fresh and white bouquet is what comes to my mind