Intercourse Poem by Prabir Gayen

Intercourse

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-Intercourse-

With all the colours that thou ow'st,
Cometh to my being sterile by being alone.
Pourest on this faded heart the rain of love unconditional,
And revive this arid pond to saturation.
The moon that shines through foggy cloud can't hide thy love,
Nor do I suppress my vergin delight.
Upon the field unploughed by time,
Will I make a candestine footing to make thee mine.
Soul upon soul following the urge of Substance.
Corporal harmony with pain of unity will take us to mutual intercourse.
On eyeslids pale will exude dreamy fragrance of nothingness.
Life is a foamy pain untold and unheard by mind.
Upon the leaves it glitters,
In the mind it fetters,
Life is a deep womb unfathomable by conception.
Inside the aura of mystic bond unusual in kind,
we wilt make a dreary domicile,
With no light to shine and no air to blow upon our Lit-up souls.
A deep sensation wilt hush up the pain of being in separation,
Wilt cover the unknown pulsation
That brings forth restlessness without root.
The rootless Immensity wilt writ our charged body into unified whole.
The wholeness wilt stem from wholeness and wholeness wilt be our whatness.

Monday, September 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Ghosh 11 June 2020

That brings forth restlessness without root. The rootless Immensity wilt writ our charged body into unified whole. The wholeness wilt stem from wholeness and wholeness wilt be our whatness. .....////

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2018

(cont.) and intercourse to me translates into entering (and exiting) a. but perhaps you had something else in mind? even without necessarily understanding, i enjoyed the sound of the poem as i read it. bri :) p.s. wilt writ is either a typo or too poetic for me!

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Bri Edwards 01 October 2018

Ah, allegory. that may help explain why i probably did not understand well with one reading and will not read again, lest i wilt. speaking of wilt, i think you are using wilt as a form of the verb will, but so far, online, i only see stuff (mostly) about plants becoming limp. now, limp is something a guy (and gal/girl) often do not wish for during intercourse. (cont.)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2018

apart from virgin typo its like Shakespeares OTHELO GOETH THOU AND READEST WOW

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