If I Write A Poem Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

If I Write A Poem

Rating: 5.0


If I write a poem,
It would whisper in rhyme;
Telling the millions of hearts
That it would last a lifetime.

If I write a poem,
It would be thought-provoking;
Piercing deep into the mind
Of a man of critical thinking.

If I write a poem,
It would warm the heart;
It would welcome the day
For a promising start.

If I write a poem,
I would let my emotions flow;
To touch the innermost feelings
And keep the faith aglow.

If I write a poem,
I would portray the beauty;
To charm the famous painters
Tangled in the canvas activity.

If I write a poem,
I would let the people pore;
Not only by eager eyes
But also by voices galore.

If I write a poem,
I know they will rate it five;
But I keep on going
So fire inside shall stay alive.

I would create for the rune hunters,
And save the verses for them;
They couldn't help but muse,
If I write a poem.

Sunday, November 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 30 April 2017

Wow! Such an amazing piece, Bernard... 😊 Full of wisdom and I love the way it rhymes...Trully, you are amazing! Perfect 10 If I write a poem, I would let my emotions flow; If I write a poem, I know they will rate it five;

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 April 2017

Thanks, CHE.... your kind comment encourages me to create more poems....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 April 2017

Thanks, CHE... your comment encourages me to write more poems....

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Manonton Dalan 15 November 2015

if I write a poem... I know they will rate it 5 but I keep on going.

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Valsa George 06 December 2020

A good poem will converse with its readers. It will disclose the emotions of the poet and charm them with their rhyme. It will surely be a reflection of the inmost thoughts and feelings of the poet! Such poems will stay long in the memory of the readers and continue to delight them. You have beautifully summed up what a poem should be and how it will impact the readers!

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Avid Fan 03 May 2019

If I write a poem, It would whisper in rhyme; Telling the millions of hearts That it would last a lifetime. An inspiring poem, sir Bernard.

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Cheryl Tutaan 04 January 2019

If I write a poem, It would whisper in rhyme; Such poetric words, dear Bernard...............................

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Aniruddha Pathak 11 December 2018

If I write a poem, what a beautiful penmanship! Not 5 you straightaway get a 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 16 June 2017

Inspirational and profound. So beautifully crafted! Thank you for bringing it to my attention, Bernard. Most definitely 10++++++

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Thanks, Richard...... a big like 👍 to your comment....

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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