Ideal Couple Poem by Liza Sud

Ideal Couple

Rating: 4.8

They look like sister and brother,
They laugh in the same way.
They may become wife and husband,
Like 2 sides of 1 face.

Their gestures have much in common,
Blue jackets at sofa grey.
Everyone is glad who saw them
Treats life as a game to play.

If I ever asked Lord Jesus
To show an ideal pair –
I even would not believe it,
That people could be the same.

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Они - как брат и сестра,
одинаково любят смеяться.
Природные - муж и жена,
лица одного - две части.

У них похожие жесты.
диван, свитера голубые,
все рады, кто их ни встретит,
и жизнь для них - словно игры.

И если б я Бога просила -
показать идеальную пару -
не верила бы до сих пор,
что может быть так прекрасно!

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: ideals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pijush Biswas 13 November 2015

very good poem like it thank

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Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Two sides of same face.. Wow an perfect ideal couple

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2015

Gorgeous expression. Beautiful and amusing one. Wisely shared really. Thank u dear Liza.....10

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Daniel Brick 14 November 2015

LIKE TWO SIDES OF ONE FACE is a marvelous image of this Ideal Couple. To achieve this quality of ONENESS is truly blessed, it demands the highest sense of caring for another human being and an unselfishness that transcends ordinary life. But at the end of your poem I knew what state the Ideal Couple had achieved - it is Happiness.

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Chuy Amante 13 November 2015

Oneness exists it comes after complete forgiveness when the other can do no wrong it is real and rare on earth jesus did live that a wonderful write that gets my heart and mind gonig, nothing beats that thank YOU

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 13 November 2015

Is it a dream of Liza? or a real life event of some value? What ever, it's a nice write of a poetic touch. Enjoyed.

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