I Want Not - 01: The Vastness Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

I Want Not - 01: The Vastness

Rating: 4.9


I want not
that greatness of an ocean
that never touches the land
that never bathes
the dirt and dust
of the tiny landscape
born out of her,
brought up along with,
craves to be with her.

I want to be
just a pool to cater
to the needs of
my neighbours around
people, plants or animals
birds or ants,
fishes or snakes
Everyone there
who does gather.

I Want Not - 01: The Vastness
Thursday, December 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dedication,lifestyle,neighbors,social comment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Human achievements are human resources and must be shared amongst the inhabitants of the land. People who become great forget that their height, fame, status, strength, caliber, everything that they achieve are something to be adored by people, the neighbours, not the peaks or oceans or the sky above.
We must love to share what we have.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Alina for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Rani for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing Sonali

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks dear Sona for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Sonali for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 07 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++++ Lopa

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Lopamudra for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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