I Feel Alive Poem by Mantrana Mahi Agarwal

I Feel Alive

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The birds seem to chirp

The air seems to hum

The Light seems to glow

And the wind seems to blow





The dandelions fly by

The birds to fly

The leaves blow across

and the air is filled with moss



The dogs' bark, the cats purr

The mice are collecting fur

the breeze whistles

as the window shake letting in bristles



As I apply my final touches

I have a chuckle as the brush brushes

And when my painting comes to live

I feel alive

Monday, February 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images. An insightful depiction of bliss of creativity, well articulated and elegantly penned with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Mantrana.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2018

Mantrana, such an amazing poemπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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