I Dreamed Of Love Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Dreamed Of Love

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I dreamed of love
but not like this –

a silent heart
a frozen kiss

vain conceit, deceit

words unmeant
passion spent.

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I dreamed of love
the gentle kind –

sweet and true
to ease the mind

unmeasured, treasured

soft and pure
ever sure.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 29 August 2013

heart breaking- dream-love-loving-to be loved-dream-love soft and pure- unmeasured beautiful

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R.benjamin Abate 29 August 2013

Pure and sincere. Very nice poem. Thank you.

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Joseph Anderson 31 August 2013

Just like love on a hot afternoon, not what one would wish for. A startling revelation-bittersweet

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Dinesan Madathil 31 August 2013

What is love then Valerie? Did you dream of it quite differently than every one one us would? What is perfection is illogical as well.

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Hans Vr 01 September 2013

I love this poem. We all dream of love in its upmost form. We do find so many mean forms of 'love' that the love our dreams sometimes seems unreal. But we cannot give up. Love is real, love is wonderful. Keep believing, Val, keep dreaming. I keep trying unconcitional love myself. I only succeed in brief moments and it seems more of coincidences than something I really did. But we have to keep beleiving, Val, keep dreaming. Excellent poem

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Amitava Sur 16 October 2013

A lovely poem with less words but saying a lot..... very nice

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Rigzin Namgyal 08 October 2013

..a beautiful and sweet dream..wonderful write..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 September 2013

A beautiful piece. You have my best regards, Val x

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Kelvin Owusu 18 September 2013

a wonderful dream that is. I dream that one day if I'm lucky I'll meet the other half of me

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Rekha Mandagere 16 September 2013

So sweetly expressed. Beautiful: -)

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