Hurry Up It's Time! Poem by Abha Sharma

Wow.... it is amazing that there is so little time to do what you need to do.....100 years is not a long time.... you can close your eyes for only a second when you are 10 and wake up and be 65..... time is a valuable thing.... we should learn not to waist it 'cause once it is gone, there is no turning back very good poem ----*over and out, the devilz work is done*-------------

good write, , but slow down a while..

A real piece of Art. 'Birth and death, forever destined Time separates the two The beginning and end are governed by Him The middle part for us is due' I like these lines.Shakespeare once said in his sonnet 'Like as the waves': our every moment moves towards death.So we should not waste our time in vain and futile activities.So we should enjoy every moments and devote ourselves to the meaningful works.It is stated in these lines: 'Waiting long may become a crime. Indomitable doom will gift us woe.' Really an encouraging poem.

the time's wheel is charged with speed so hurry up and do the good deed take care Abha

as time moves on and we are in betweenthe two the birth and death when destined as ordained in our space and time to rave up as we to trudge with sun from rising to the setting by the day time changes we would be thrown to oblivion beautiful poem, w3ell penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

All civilizations, culture, creed are giving us nothing except trash. We only confine ourselves into it. We should break all the barriers of the society because it stops us to help others when they are in a fix. Brotherhood is our culture, Our humanity is our civilization, love and peace are our creed.

Do not wallow in self pity or wonder where life went wrong do not waste your time on yesterday, today you must be strong life is for the living, we can't turn back the clock to dwell on our misgivings is like a tick without a tock

living each day as if was going to be your last.hurry up...really expresses what i have come to believe. let not life pass you by, there is no time for regrets so give it your best. very thoughtful piece of writing. thanks Abha

What a wonderfull piece of write, and I have felt this way about life/death all my life, my own personal point of view, we are here for the middle, and our savior knows from birth when our death will be and how.... Very good work! ! Bonnie

Well expressed - the gap between life and death is all we have. We have to make the best of it. No matter what happens time moves on relentlessly. You have a way of picking up the things which are indeed worthy of being written about. Take care...