Hot Rain Poem by Sammy Aswani Luyove

Hot Rain

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HOT RAIN

I see it falling,
As it showers on me like a hot geyser,
It wets my heart and I'm wading in it
Like a duck wading in the mud,
Its drops make me sweat
Making my heart throb like a tinsmith hammer,
And my ribs ache from the quarrel against
Its endless gongs, endless I must stress
In fact my ribs are soon bursting
Like a badly beaten drum
I stammer and drawl likes a baby,
So, what is it in the rain!

I'll not paste my lips and go mute
No. I'll not be silent,
No. I'll not drool like a hyena.
I'll not walk in the rain alone
Because you are the rainbow
So, I will count its colours
And call them names
And discover what burns in the hot rain
To cool the ache and throbbing in my chest
For the rain is hot.

Monday, September 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When the confusion of feelings while in love ends a lover must dare to count the colours of the rainbow and give them names by pouring their heart out.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 14 September 2020

Beautifully concieved and creatively presented the hot rain and duck wading full of emotions. Beautiful expressive poetry.

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Sammy Aswani Luyove

Sammy Aswani Luyove

HAMISI, VIHIGA, KENYA
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