Hold You Tight Poem by Gabriel Oluwalana

Hold You Tight

Rating: 4.7


I've found a treasured thing around me
More glitter than the gold in a vault
And more valuable than any diamond

The one like the tree of precious almond
That lady with a gorgeous smile ever
Her eyes I once see 'tis a glittering memory

Her gesture I once knew, is a candlelight
A brightening light to my darkest path
I ever need not a clock on my wall

Because you're one of a better hourglass
In watching, I ever want to see you always
Your glowing face, and to hold you tight

Sunday, August 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2021

Beautiful description of a loved one. A well expressed and heartwarming poem.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 24 March 2022

Smiles😀

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 May 2022

A Wonderful Poem Top 5

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Marvellous poem, Dear Poet, Mr Oluwalana. Waiting for more,5*

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks for your comment. I have new poem 'Tales of My Heart'. Check it.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 07 November 2021

It's a delight to read this romantic gem.5 stars.

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Karen Jane 27 August 2021

Nice poem Mr. Oluwalana. Keep writing and never stop your hourglass from rotating.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 24 March 2022

Smiles.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 August 2021

Heartwarming poem so finest and touching thought and created. Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! Congratulations dear poet! 5 Stars for this touching poem.

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Gabriel Oluwalana 02 January 2023

Thanks so much. I'm excited.

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