Her Empty Castle Poem by Aqua Flower

Her Empty Castle

Rating: 5.0


In her castle, she lived by herself
waiting for her prince to arrive
but he only came once in a while
just to keep the fire alive
she never wanted more
she never had demands
her only wish was for him to be her man
but her castle stayed empty inside
often desperate for his love to arrive
he comes with love in abundance
he comes with passion and romance
but he cannot come with the commitment that would somehow enhance
so her song remains without a tune
a flavor without a meal
steps without a dance
a fantasy that will never be real
but she cannot let go
of the love that he bestows
living without would indeed make her pout
in her empty castle

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Wednesday, July 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: castle,fantasy,romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
originally posted as Aqua Flower (the princess is)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 20 July 2018

The fantasy created with a part time lover, very good poem, a 10.

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Aqua Flower 21 July 2018

Thank you for your comment on an old poem of mine. It came from the princess. She is still awaiting her prince to arrive and stay!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 July 2018

Such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Lovely is a lovely word. thank you!

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Robert Murray Smith 18 July 2018

Wonderfully penned.++++10- - - -

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Thank you for your wonderful comment! This is one of my original poems posted a while ago. I reposted as this was a favorite of mine!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

A wonderful comment! thank you!

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Practicing Poetess 18 July 2018

I had a prince like that- - He ran hot & cold- - Nearly drove me crazy! He couldn't commit, either. A girl friend told me, 'Don't expect more than he's giving now.' A very relatable poem!

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Us princesses have to stick together so we don't go crazy! Good advice from a girlfriend! Thank you for your comment.

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

I'm glad you didn't go crazy lol...love does that at times. Your girlfriend's advice is a good one! Thank you for your comments!

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