Helpless Poem by Kwai Chee Low

Helpless

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He stared at his surgeon robe.
White, hanging limp and lifeless,
as the little girl on the operation table.
He had fought for her life, but failed.

She had been hopeful, excited at the hope
of a new life free from pain,
but fate thought otherwise
and the angel of death was relentless.

Now he huddled in a forgotten corner,
Sobbing, and wracked by grief, he was shouting
"Why? You showed me this path,
but you did not show me the way! "
His shouts, hoarse, a lone voice in the darkening storm.

Wednesday, November 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cigeng Zhang 23 November 2016

Your poem reminded me of the quote by Kahlil Gibran, Verily you are suspended like scales between your sorrow and your joy/ Only when you are empty are you at standstill and balanced. Why? You showed me this path, but you did not show me the way! ... You spoke out what I also wanted to say.

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Kwai Chee Low 27 November 2016

Thank you, Cigeng. You have nailed it!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

Lifeless! Helpless. Pain! ! Sorrow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kwai Chee Low 17 November 2016

Thank you, Edward. It is the grief and sorrow of true doctors.

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