He Flew Fast (An Experiment) Poem by Practicing Poetess

He Flew Fast (An Experiment)

Rating: 5.0


I
thought I
saw
a fly
on
the wall
down
the hall
but
I think
on
the sink
is
where he
now
must be.

Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fly,insect,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 23 January 2020

Flies are a nuisance, I find. I always have fly spray on hand.

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Tom Allport 30 October 2017

a poem of now you see me now you don't pesky fly's can make us grunt? ................well penned PP

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Practicing Poetess 31 October 2017

Thank you, Tom, for reading & enjoying this little creative aberration! Sometimes I like to just play around and veer off course from the normal, established poetic styles & forms. Innovation.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 May 2017

I Like This! ! ! ! ! Very Cute! ! ! ! ! And Well Thought Out! ! ! ! ! Brings Smiles! ! ! ! ! Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Thank you, Rebecca, for liking an undeserving poem that hasn't received much attention! It seems that most people prefer the pretty little sonnets and love poems to anything innovative. Thank you for noticing and commenting! :)

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