Hard Times Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Hard Times

Rating: 2.6


Your wrapped but perfidious smiles,
haunting me,
like strikes of ironic fate,
while i am walking through,
a crowd with my absent mind.
Murmuring the bitter song
of, your loud laughs.
And i see my desire pinned on street walls,
While the worn out doors,
and windows opened,
and graced with gazing eyes.
like birds sitting on trees,
wanting for rest after sunset.
with night is studded with unkind treachery, on the way,
paved with cobblestones and trash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

nicely penned! ......10+

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Stephanie Fiddy 12 July 2009

wonderful write 10+++++++

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Saadat Tahir 12 July 2009

a superb rendering...great love poem with a sad twist really liked it cheers

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Lady Grace 11 July 2009

always remember hard times are not always...hard times may come but it goes..hard times are sweet to remember in times of success...grace

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Rehana Nazli 16 May 2010

'Your wrapped but perfidious smiles, haunting me, like strikes of ironic fate, ' Man must play a role in writing his fate delibrately or not I am not sure. Sadness is part and parcel of defeated fate of love.

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Ejaz Khan 30 July 2009

A heart touching write, good flow and descriptive!

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wanting for rest after sunset. with night is studded with unkind treachery, on the way, paved with cobblestones and trash.....very good and onnovative write.. lovely presentation.... read mine dead nights and yes to to

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excellent writing, , with so beautiful romantic images...10+++++

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Catrina Heart 13 July 2009

A fine picturesque.....nicely penned with great diction...10+++

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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