Happy Diwali Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Happy Diwali

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O'er phone
you wished me
HappyDiwali
I responded with
the same to You.

But, I was lying
on the bed thinking of
the darkness
in the room
prevailed long
although no load shedding
announced earlier.

I wished the world
an eternal transition
from darkness
to light
but Me,
in utter darkness
in my sleeping room
find no outlet.

O'er phone you
wished me Happy Diwali.

Thursday, October 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sister Frances 24 October 2017

There's so much sadness in your words...In a day correct me not that promises hope and light. Very cleverly penned

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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 October 2017

Thanks for such a lovely appreciation.I loved it.Regards

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Pratik Rajani 23 October 2017

happy diwali happy new year and nice poem like it check out my poem sun and planet

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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 October 2017

Thanks for nice comments.Regards

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Binayakumar Mohanty 24 October 2017

Thanks for nice comments.Regards.

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Rajnish Manga 19 October 2017

It is indeed a sublime idea to wish light for others even while sitting in darkness but it surely leaves a trail of pain somewhere in back of the mind. Thanks.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Thanks Sir for you read and appreciated the poem nicely. Binaya

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