Haiku (You Are With Me) Poem by Rajnish Manga
Haiku (You Are With Me)
You are with me- I say
But on second thought I discover
You are not with me.
very common emotion out of the couple's conflicts...indeed a good haiku-10 Thank you Rajnish for all your comments on my poems
I am so glad to receive critical comments on some of my poems from a senior poet like you. These are reassuring as well as inspiring. Thanks a lot, Mdm Indira ji.
A puzzle so well portrayed......interesting haiku
Nice haiku on the poem theme. Many relationships lack the required mutual understanding 10+
No body is perfect, one may be partly with you but may not be completely with you.
This story is as old as human kind, very well put Rajnish. We are all looking for connection outside when the only lasting connection is within us. Wonderful haiku. Food for reflection.10
Thank you, Norah, for visiting the poem and sharing your views with regard to its theme.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderful Haiku.................................................10+++ Please check the second line for syllables.
Thanks for your lovely comments and also for correcting me.