frozen emotions
sheds tear of a melting heart
to shatter the cold
I can feel the ghush of pain seeping through the eyes. Very well expressed.
Fantastically worded, Dr. M. Asim Sir! TOP Score and myriads more! Fascinating Haiku
Beautifully penned one... Thanks for sharing with us.... 5* from me....
Splendidly brilliant and glorious! A tear that saves the heart from dying. One of the most beautiful and sensitive, Haikus I have ever read!
The resilience and strength of the heart to bring the warmth of love where cold feelings have invaded.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent Haiku Asim, top marks.