Haiku-Ideal Versus Reality Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India

Haiku-Ideal Versus Reality

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My camera starts
I was confident to shoot
At point an ant bites.

Friday, November 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: reality
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

oh! the accident! perfect everything was there all become undone!

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

into each life a little rain must fall. i think i heard that once and it just came to my mind. i think the saying is referring to rain as a bothersome event. BUT lots of times it is very good that 'rain' falls, so maybe there was goodness in the act of the ant biting? bri :))

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

hahahah that is nice. an ant bites at that moment of shooting. very very nice. i laughed and smiled and there is joy in me as i read it. that is poetic imagination. thank you very much. tony

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B.m. Biswas 15 April 2020

Here actually the gap between the ideal and reality has been depicted....When you you imagine or do something perfectly the reality must falls shot.....We can't touch the ideal....We cherish...

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 December 2015

There are surprises in life. Nice work.

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Shakil Ahmed 27 November 2015

beautiful haiku, with a few words you have nicely presented a big theme, thanks for sharing.

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Sk. Nurul Huda

Sk. Nurul Huda

Debipur, Memari, Burdwan, West Bengal, India
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