Haiku-7 (Friendship) Poem by Saheb Mohapatra

Haiku-7 (Friendship)

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Friendship's like the sky,
Without something it's always blank;
The quarrels, acting as stars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 November 2014

Nice haiku with nice thought.....top marks

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2017

Insightful and nicely encapsulated train of thought. Beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing Saheb and do remain blessed.

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* Sunprincess * 13 August 2015

.............nice write...friendship is a wonderful theme ★

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Valsa George 11 November 2014

Small occasional fights make friendship more strong and stable! Nice Haiku!

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Salini Nair 10 November 2014

The quarrels, acting as stars............................nice haiku saheb

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 November 2014

Void- wide -we speak with stars yet stars never speak they speak on pamistry and through fortune tellers so friendship is a great ship with a hole in it..nice poem

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