Grains Of Sand Poem by Theresa Ann Moore

Grains Of Sand

Rating: 3.8


Grains of sand take command
As insignificant specks
Accumulate and expand
Extending beyond complex…

Setting into motion
A colossal chain reaction
Releasing an outburst of emotion
Weighted by minute fractions

Submerged… locked in place
Struggling to emerge
Vanishing without a trace
As grains of sand converge

11/10/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 10 November 2008

Same title with my poem though this is more expressive and a little vivid...great rhyming of words.a 10.

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John Dohoney 10 November 2008

great rhyme yet its still something concrete that you can comprehend, a great combination

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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