God- You Are The One Poem by abhipsa panda

God- You Are The One

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Going through the heaps of pain,
I found the support of your hands.
Before my efforts fall in drain,
on your mercy I always depend.

The authority with purity,
justify my innocence with clarity.
I often search you with curiosity,
to thank for saving my dignity.

It's so easy to be cruel,
but without reason is really hell.
How can someone tolerate this?
praying for death is resulting wish.

How strong is the telepathy,
why don't others feel as you do?
Why not others having sympathy?
can't they see my pain with your view

Monday, December 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: complain,devotion,god
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When all the roads are closed for us, we find the support of the ultimate authority extending his hands for our help...though we are all the creations of the same god....still all differ in their approach..why the creations of god don't have the same sense as the almighty is having?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

How strong is the telepathy, why don't others feel as you do? Why not others having sympathy? can't they see my pain with your view. telepathy, curiosity, clarity, dignity, purity. so many key words i write which affected me as i read this poem on positiveness. write, write dear poetess. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

Thank you sir for reading and appreciating my lines and motivating me to write more

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 December 2018

Abhipsa, such an uplifting poem................10++++++++++++++

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Abhipsa, lovely poem. Faith heals us of all ills! Keep it up, dear poet

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation crafted with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Abhipsa Panda 24 November 2019

Thank you sir for your nice comments

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 January 2019

We all live in GOD'S hands and MERCY PEACE SO BE WITH EACH YOUR lovely comment brought me here do read my MOM'S SMILES O POETESS DEAR YOU will adore of that I am sure poet me

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 January 2019

Very impressive write, Abhipsa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2018

The bitter-sweet lament of an aching heart... which time and God will surely heal. A heart-warming poem.

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Abhipsa Panda 24 November 2019

Thanks mam for getting time to read my poem and commenting on that

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