God Poem by Leslie Alexis

God

Rating: 5.0


The universe is chaos
Spontaneity is divine
Ask the great enthalpy
Entropy of another kind

All things when left naturally
Move to a state of lower energy
Which left alone equals
To things sorting randomly

Not grouping uniformly
As found in the human body
Not grouping uniformly
As found in the simplest algae

I think it’s an absurdity
To think things just came to be
Just like that – miraculously,
It does not stand rationally

Well, not to me, and I’m wise
So unbelievers, open your eyes,
You are more than just energy,
There’s a God who made you and me

Who realizing his people were lost
Came to earth and died on the cross,
Went to hell and took death’s key
And in doing gave hope to you and me

That on dying our fate won’t be the same
All we need to do is call on his name
Believing in him as creator of all things
Praising him alone as king of all kings.

Copyright © 2009 Leslie Alexis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Sedique 12 December 2009

awesome poem, you just keep writing and you will be proud of your work

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Eyan Desir 14 December 2009

How did the sun came to be? Who makes the air we breathe So many ppl are in to magical art Come on ppl there is a Super nature force beyond man......Open your eyes its a war on earth...we are the pawns good write Les hope they see the light

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The religion of the future will be a cosmic religion. It should transcend personal God and avoid dogma and theology. Covering both the natural and the spiritual, it should be based on a religious sense arising from the experience of all things natural and spiritual as a meaningful unity. Buddhism answers this description. If there is any religion that could cope with modern scientific needs it would be Buddhism. (Albert Einstein

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy (7/23/2010 4: 59: 00 AM) | Delete this message I doest not adopt a creed What say your 'Heart, of others whom reflect? 'God is not he God is not she God is we' -Buddhism 'All things that have 'Self' are Godly' - Swami Universal Temple NYC.NY 1960

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 January 2010

Wonderful line and to my mind this ‘more’ than is Energy [in upper case]…not energy [lower case] Thanks Sir for such a presentation 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 December 2009

a wonderful poem leslie...the uniformity in creation is amazing...i too will not think it just happened...we are not just energy...we have love...at times we become totally hopeless...starting as a believer or a non believer seems alright...but that is not just it...man does have a growth from within which reason cannot find...love can never be defined

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Michael Gale 16 December 2009

Oh great! Now I'll have to find my dictionary to look up the meaning of these two words(enthalpy Entropy) . Like I did not have enough to do today? (LOL!) Great write. This will keep me on my toes, with the dictionary. Who says you don't learn something new, every day? One of your best. God bless us all-MJG.

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