Gloomy Atmosphere Poem by Octavian Cocos

Gloomy Atmosphere

Rating: 5.0


Outside it's raining, I'm in agony
Because it's cold and I can stand no more
And while I'm gazing from my balcony
I feel I'm dead already in my core.

The sidewalks look as if they're cast in lead
The people slowly pass along the gates,
They drag their feet and all appear half-dead,
The wind has frozen solid their traits.

All cars seem ugly, obsolete and gray
A wretched tram slides lazily on rails
The atmosphere is gloomy and decay
Creeps in my room where darkness now prevails.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2021

Excellent! Thanks for sharing your feelings and emotions with your immediate ambience..5 stars

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