Forbidden Fruit Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Forbidden Fruit

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Forbidden fruit hangs
challenging on the tree in God's Paradise
Adam and Eve succumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 September 2017

NO, NO no, Adam and Eve NEVER succumbed, they went away from the Garden of Eden. All of asudden they were aware of themselves that they are naked. BEFORE their SIN, they lived all naked in the Garden of Eden without being ashamed. After they committed that sin, they must go away from this most beautiful greenest Garden on Earth, the Garden of Eden, and they have to seek themselves eats and all that when they are hungry and......................Eve would suffer much pain when she wanted her baby be born. BUT whatever, I am happiest in everything God is doing and has done for us the mankind of the world. Good poem, since this is the basic to have our dialogues about God and His Creation. Thank YOU so much for posting this on PoemHunter.com

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2017

OH, great LUCK, my Comment is back here. Thank you GOD and PH its system, haha.................LOL....the PH´s system of DIS appear and then APPEAR again. Marvelous!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2017

THE EXISTENCE of THE SIN, we cannot shout and be mad on Adam and Eve, BECAUSE they were our FIRST fore-parents, WITHOUT them we do never exist and God is alone with His Most Wealthy Creations, you know them from the Bible. HOW would the world look like without this sin? HOW would GOD fill it? Of course with humans with NO SINS AT ALL. because GOD has that ability....Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler.

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