First Love Poem by kalista mccart

First Love

Rating: 4.0


you where my first love
you broke my heart
you where there for me
you said you loved me

i gave you everything
i loved you
i kissed your lips
i loved your heat

you said you loved me
i gave you it all to you
you kiss me
i kiss you back

i love you
you love me but not the same as i love you
i need you to live
you think of me as your sister

i need you to survive
you say goodbye
i'm falling
your to only one who can save me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yara Sherif 12 February 2009

it is so beautiful and i feel all what you wrote

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<font color=black>Nagourta 28 January 2009

'Those who fall and come crashing down, like the oceaen waves they will break apart and become but separated droplets in the sea.' -Nagourta

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

Simple and so beautiful...thank you

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