Brave soul that I am
So adventure bound
Course map in my hand
Stars as my compass
I follow new path
Critics don't hinder
Skeptics I laugh at
I have found passion
Excellent poem, dear Richard, first your own need is the most important, then comes the turn of the other's expectations. Thank you for sharing,5 Stars Top Score!
Dillip, you've guided me on that path. And I owe you a world of gratitude!
I like your poem. But " I follow new path" sounds awkward to me. You may want to consider " I follow new paths" or " I follow a new path" .
With all due respect, Michael I truly appreciate you liking my poem. And sometimes, it's just truly respectful to leave the words just as they were written.
Passionate brave soul can make a great journey to the inner greatest kingdom!
So true, one should write first to fulfill an inner need, and not necessarily to meet the expectations of others. Really good poem.
Right on, Carl! Totally agree with you! THX so very much for believing it to be a really good poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
and i hope it's poetry that you are passionate for
Isn't it obvious, my great cheerleader?