Fidelity Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Fidelity

Rating: 5.0


Somewhere are you roaming with someone.
Somewhere are you sleeping with
Someone.
Somewhere are you caressing someone
Somewhere are you kissing someone
If our thoughts are in this way
When we are not near
We lose our fidelity of love.
'Oh' my dear,
Are you waiting for me lonley?
Are you crying for me lonley?
Are you aching for me lonley?
Are your heart still beating for me,
While I am far away.
Are your eyes still waking for me,
While I am far away.
If our thoughts are in this way
When we are far away
We install fidelity of love in our hearts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 25 October 2011

I know what your saying. A really great poem. Good write. Like it a lot.

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Spiritual Seeker 28 September 2011

Again a mastery in feeling...v well written! Will be a favourite to many. A 10.

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

Very beautiful writing. You are more right than you know.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Loved the way the statements related to fidelity are ordered here in a closed path of poetry....well written though

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