Feeling Of The Failure Poem by Dana Ghaffari

Feeling Of The Failure

Rating: 4.5


I don't love the feeling of the failure
Hands are shaking and no voices in the ears
Everything you are watching is damn unclear
Because in your mind everything's up in the air
When everyone tells you, "'s ok, no problem dear"
You're burning inside and thinking it's the end
While it's not babe, you have so many steps to take
Live in now and try and strive for your needs in real
Maybe yesterday you had not your good chance
Today baby just keep on, attempt to advance
Future is yours if you do best of your bests
Now I'm tired of failing let me get some rest

Friday, October 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: failure
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written while I was riding a bus
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 17 December 2020

Really a motivational piece of poetry written with insight...

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Yiyan Han 14 November 2020

" Future is yours if you do best of your bests" - like this, and well done!

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Khairul Ahsan 16 October 2020

'Maybe yesterday you had not your good chance Today baby just keep on, attempt to advance Future is yours if you do best of your bests Now I'm tired of failing let me get some rest; - these lines are very inspiring.

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