Faith Flows In Sand Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Faith Flows In Sand
We are passing on sea shore
To make flow of mind we feel
Swimming boat stands up here
To hold us it carries minds.
We too feel thee in moving
The fresh air dances on rock
Mock test it does to pass
We write emotion in sea water
Rivers flow towards to travel
We gather and separate minds
To travel towards eternity
We always proceed and gather
On this stage of drama wheel
Actions we perform is faithful
To give fruits these run
We bear what we act to travel
Fair it is we observe more
Sand in storm blows in wind
Sunny day adores more them
To write luck we awake sure
Pure mind tells to hold idea
Look at in faith flows sand.
Faith flows in sand is a nice poem I had to read it a couple of times to get the whole meaning. The figurative language employed is awesome. Thanks for sharing.
We should perform faithful actions. Duty should be done properly. This poem is interesting.
Faith of God flows within us, when we feel and link with God. This poem is greatly written.
Mock test! But, is mankind ready for the truth? Nice work.
A very metaphoric write where life is imagined as a flowing sea! Enjoyed the poem!
There is a powerful connection between the Sea and The Holy See that can only be realized via an unfettered Faith in The Supreme and HIS many mysteries that challenge this Faith but that cannot and will not be revealed and marveled at in absolute until the last Gold Seal be opened...An excellent piece of work, Kumar...~FjR(+) MXV~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful drop. 'Pure mind tells to hold idea, look at in faith flows sand. ' is so beautiful. Inspiring.