End Of The Day Poem by Sanjukta Nag

End Of The Day

Rating: 5.0


Silent dreams are dressing
Inside greenish eyelids of woods

From finest glossy wings
Ethereal touch is slipping smooth

To the faraway west
Where sun simpered alone hazily

Reflecting on the stream
That conceives rainbow secretly

The moon breaks beams
On the edges of tranquil retreat

I'll offer you half of my heart
If you find me the other half of it.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2015

Groovy presentation beginning with metaphorical write like...Silent dreams are dressing Inside greenish eyelids of woods. Many thanks dear Sanjukta for posting such attractive poem.....10

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Wow, A puzzle in love, I liked it, offering half is creating desire for searching the other half............Awesome, Loved it, loved it.....Let me give a try.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 October 2015

Simply mind blowing. Ten out of ten.

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